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Family, friendships, and fierce competition; enter the world of Jack as he navigates the life of a horse racer while also navigating family responsibilities and his minimal friendships.
I would rate One Out and Won Back a full four out of four or five out of five because it kept me engaged, and I could tell it had been well edited. Parents and middle school-aged children would enjoy this book. I also think anyone interested in horses or in taking care of them would connect with this story. Its simplistic structure makes it easy to follow. The character development the author took time to craft is evident in how each character is portrayed and how they interact.
If I were to give the author some tips to improve the story, I would have said to relay to the children who they are and why so many people want to snag him. Another way to deepen the story is to give more background or flashbacks between the grown brothers. This character line was one area that I felt was present but not as strong as it could have been. I did enjoy several of the other character arcs in the story, and I appreciated the way that even if there was a "love interest," the author kept things PG. Often, I have to read books before my eleven-year-old in order to make sure she won't read something that is against our family values.
The author helps their readers visualize everything that is taking place in the story by the way that they utilize adjectives and descriptive phrasing. A poignant example of this states, "despite being filled with fright, he wore a mask of calmness". Who was frightened? Who was pretending to be calm? Why were they pretending to be calm? Answer these questions and more by reading this story!
Such a wholesome story filled with friendships and intrigue. Grab a copy for yourself or a young person that you know. They are sure to enjoy this fun read by Arnold van der Vegt.
There was something unique about this book, starting with the title, One Out and Won Back. At first, I thought it was strange, but once I began reading, the plot twists quickly drew me in. Jeremy and Melissa, siblings dealing with an alcoholic father and the loss of their mother, are sent to their Uncle Jack’s place. Rumors paint Jack as a bad man, especially when Ella said her dad said Jack is a cheat, and Melissa’s injury during a horse incident adds to the book's enjoyment and tension.
I initially assumed the story would be about an abusive uncle, but it turned in unexpected ways that kept me hooked until the last page. I love how the story portrayed the importance of family bonds.
What I loved most was the bravery of the siblings especially when they outsmarted characters I didn't expect they would and the reminder of how important family truly is. The characters fit their roles beautifully, from Melissa’s humorous bond with Ella to Jack’s touching relationship with Sally.
Though I noticed some minor editing issues which were issues with the incorrect use of hyphenation, they didn’t affect my enjoyment in any way. This book was entertaining, heartwarming, and meaningful, an epic read for me, which I think it'll be epic for both young adults and older readers. I highly recommend it.
If I were to give the author some tips to improve the story, I would have said to relay to the children who they are and why so many people want to snag him. Another way to deepen the story is to give more background or flashbacks between the grown brothers. This character line was one area that I felt was present but not as strong as it could have been. I did enjoy several of the other character arcs in the story, and I appreciated the way that even if there was a "love interest," the author kept things PG. Often, I have to read books before my eleven-year-old in order to make sure she won't read something that is against our family values.
The author helps their readers visualize everything that is taking place in the story by the way that they utilize adjectives and descriptive phrasing. A poignant example of this states, "despite being filled with fright, he wore a mask of calmness". Who was frightened? Who was pretending to be calm? Why were they pretending to be calm? Answer these questions and more by reading this story!
Such a wholesome story filled with friendships and intrigue. Grab a copy for yourself or a young person that you know. They are sure to enjoy this fun read by Arnold van der Vegt.